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Common Application College Essay 2012 Movie

Last month, the 2012-13 edition of the Common Application was released. Simultaneously and/or soon after, many schools released updated supplements, several of which request at least one additional essay (in addition to the personal statement and activity essay required on the Common App).

As college admissions becomes more competitive, and more students are applying to more schools, colleges are increasingly using a student's "soft factors," including letters of recommendation, interviews, resume, and essays to transform an applicant from a series of numbers into a living, breathing human being.

Colleges don't ask you to write essays because they want to make you miserable, they are asking because they want to hear from you! They want to get to know your background, interests, goals, triumphs, failures, likes, and aversions in your own voice. When reading an essay, an admissions officer will try to determine: Who are you? Will you make a valuable contribution to your our campus community? What type of character traits do you possess? Are you responsible? Shy? Creative? A Leader? A nonconformist? How have you shown your intellectual vitality?

In order to properly plan your time in the coming months, first read through each application that you plan to submit to determine the number and nature of the essays you'll have to write.

Let's take an average college list with 12 schools for a high-achieving student who wants to study business:

  • Five reach schools: University of Pennsylvania (Wharton), Cornell University (Dyson), Georgetown University (McDonough), New York University (Stern), University of Virginia
  • Four target schools: University of Michigan, Babson College, Emory University, University of Southern California
  • Three safe schools: American University (Kogod), Brandeis University, Bentley University

With this list, there are at least 20 distinct written responses!

Not only is there a large number of essays, but each requires a considerable amount of time, effort, and thought. Many schools want to know why a student is applying to that particular college. The "Why this college" essay is often the most important -- the dealmaker. Colleges want to know what you hope to gain from your education and also what you will contribute. There are seven such essays on this list of 12 schools.

For example, the University of Pennsylvania asks, "A Penn education provides a liberal arts and sciences foundation across multiple disciplines with a practical emphasis in one of four undergraduate schools: the College of Arts and Sciences, the School of Engineering and Applied Science, the School of Nursing, or the Wharton School. Given the undergraduate school to which you are applying, please discuss how you will engage academically at Penn."

Other colleges take a particularly creative approach to the application essay prompt with the hopes that students will reply in kind.

This year, the University of Virginia asks: What is your favorite word and why?; Brandeis University queries "A package arrives at your door. After seeing the contents you know it's going to be the best day of your life. What's inside and how do you spend your day?" and University of Michigan's Honors Program wants students to "Explain Unicorns."

These questions are tough. Ultimately, college admissions officers are trying to determine who they are inviting to campus and how you think. Regardless of how the question is phrased (many schools ask applicants to write about a quotation, literary work, or philosophy topic), be sure to relate the chosen material to your own ideas, outlooks, and aspirations. Dig deep - think about who you are, what's important to you, and what you want out of your education, and make sure that your essays accurately reflect those qualities.

Here are some additional tips for students writing their college essays:

  • College admissions committees want to learn something about the applicant that they cannot learn from the rest of the application; avoid writing an essay that just reiterates the activities on your resume.
  • Choose a single incident that defines who you are today and write a clear and creative essay about it -- a story only you can tell!
  • Gimmicks (such as writing your essay in a foreign language) rarely work and often make even more work for an already over-burdened admissions officer; "sob stories," topics of public consciousness, things that happened to you in middle school, and intimate details about your dating life are not good topics.
  • Don't be afraid to write about being unsuccessful. Failure is usually a growth experience.

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Question: I submitted some applications last week and when I reviewed them again, I realized that I made some mistakes. I am worried that colleges will automatically reject me now. What should I do? Help.

Answer: The first thing to do is to stay calm and assess the situation.

Before you call the admissions office and beg for forgiveness, let’s think through the options. The most important question is — what was the error? Major mistakes — misrepresenting activities, awards, academics, or personal information; mentioning the wrong name of the college; submitting the wrong essay — warrant an email or letter to the admissions officer. Minor errors — one or two spelling errors — can often be left alone.

You must remember that college admissions officers are human beings who realize that minor errors should not undo years of hard work and accomplishments. As long as the minor errors are not blatant and lead to a misrepresentation, it is probably best to let them slide.

Rest assured that admissions officers want to learn about who you are and what you can offer to their campus community. And as long as the rest of your application is solid and error-free, you will get the highest consideration. You also may not want to draw negative attention to an application that is otherwise incredible strong.

While it is best to let the little stuff slide, you certainly do not want to let major errors stand in your way. If you did the unthinkable and wrote the name of a different college or submitted the wrong essay, a thoughtful email or call to the admissions office is in order. Yours will not be the first mistake like this that they will have seen, but how you react to this error can certainly make a difference.

The best thing to do is to be apologetic and honest about what happened. Ask if it is possible to submit a revised application that will get reviewed rather than the original one submitted. If you cannot resubmit your application, ask if it is possible for you to send in a revised essay. Chances are the admissions office will say yes to that request. If you entered inaccurate information, write a detailed email or letter to the admissions office stating the corrected information. In order to simplify this process, be clear and specific. Do not leave it to the admissions officer to guess what you are trying to get across.

Remember that these major errors may have a negative impact on your admissions offer. If you told College Y that College X is your first choice, that certainly does not make a great first impression. But rather than worry about it incessantly until decisions are released, do something about it. Hoping that an admissions officer will miss something significant is not realistic. Be mature about the situation and try to right the wrong.

And before you submit more applications, check them over a couple more times and have someone you trust also do a read-through. A fresh pair of eyes checking your applications can help prevent further mistakes.

College applications are a demonstration of your past three years of high school. Admissions officers want to know what is important to you, where you have spent your free time, and what you hope to do in the future. Your applications should represent who you are, so don’t let errors keep them from doing so.

Purvi S. Mody is co-owner of Insight Education, an educational consulting firm that helps students throughout the Bay Area to achieve their educational goals. Email her at purvi@insight-education.net.