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Common App Essay 2014

With school’s final bell now behind us, students entering their final year of high school are likely focused on more tantalizing summer plans than beginning work on their Common Application essay.  And while earning some cash, sitting by the pool, and hanging out with friends are higher up on the docket at the moment, we encourage soon-to-be seniors to carve out a few moments during these laid back months to begin the surprisingly time-consuming topic selection/pre-writing portion of the essay process.  Trust us – come fall, you’ll thank yourself, especially as senior year coursework and college applications begin to pile up.

The five Common App topics, revamped in 2013, will stay the same for the 2014-15 admissions cycle.  Ultimately, you will have to choose one topic and compose a 650-word-or-less essay that wins the hearts and minds of college admissions officers.  Below, we offer some thoughts about each prompt and how to decide which one will best enable you to share a meaningful and revealing story that will strengthen and personalize your application.

Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure.  How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?

Conflict is so often at the center of a great story.  It is a chance for you to write a story where you are not the hero, at least in a traditional, conquering sense.  In a world of flattering selfies, exaggerated resumes, and a top 20 hit that repeats the phrase “I’m the man” 38 times, it can be refreshing to hear someone willingly talk about their shortcomings and less proud moments.  Subsequent growth in the wake of failure can give insight into your character, resilience, and depth.  In brainstorming this one, reflect on your life’s setbacks and whether they led to maturation or enlightenment.  Also try starting with periods of growth in your life, and work backward to what rejections/disappointment/failures led to your personal development.

Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea.  What prompted you to act?  Would you make the same decision again?

This one sounds rather grand as though colleges expect you to have led a movement of civil disobedience while bringing an imperialist colonial empire to its knees—all at the ripe age of eighteen!  Fear not, in literary terms, this is the Society vs. The Individual type of conflict and it needn’t take place on a grand stage.  Standing up to peer pressure, going against a family tradition, taking part in a local protest, or not following a directive you found to be immoral or unjust are just a few of the “real life” examples that can make for a gripping storyline.

Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content.  What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?

Contentment is not necessarily a great starting point for a story that will keep readers on the edge of their seats.  Traditionally, stories that start out as seemingly Utopian only become interesting when the gilded surface is slowly chipped away and the darker core emerges (i.e. The Giver, The Truman Show, Brave New World, etc.).  That being said, if this prompt strikes a chord with you, start prewriting to ensure that your story contains interesting layers and nuances, and is not just a blissful account of how much you enjoy killing zombies in Call of Duty.

Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.

Details of your bar mitzvah, facial hair growth, or early romantic experiences should be left on the cutting room floor (if there happens to be a pun anywhere in there, it is unintended).  Like the previous prompt about contentment, this isn’t one to force.  If a meaningful story of your own metamorphosis from childhood to adulthood jumps out at you then delve right in.  Otherwise, pass this one over.

Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it.  If this sounds like you, then please share your story.  

This is the most broad topic and the most direct remnant of the now defunct “your choice” essay.  Identity is a wide-sweeping concept.  If you have a great story to tell that doesn’t fit the other four prompts, our advice is to mold your tale to fit this category.  Here you are essentially being asked to tell the admissions committee the story from your life that most defines you.  Take advantage of this expansive umbrella!

We close with a bit of advice from our Simple Truths about the College Essay blog for tips on the writing process: Writing an essay that is compelling doesn’t mean that you need to have wrestled a puma, grown up in a cult, or discovered a new galaxy at age seven.  A great college essay can take place on a grand stage but it can just as effectively take place in everyday life.  There is a ready supply of drama, tension, and conflict in the course of a typical day.  Over the course of your life you have undoubtedly had experiences that constitute worthy topics.  Think it over.  Talk to family and friends.  Your compelling story will emerge.

Dave has over a decade of professional experience that includes work as a teacher, high school administrator, college professor, and independent education consultant. He is a co-author of the book The Enlightened College Applicant: A New Approach to the Search and Admissions Process (Rowman & Littlefield, 2016).

For an even more recent update on this news, see our Paragraphs and Print Preview post, updated on Nov 7, 2013!

When the 2013-2014 Common Application was initially released, we were warned that the essay section would bear some new restrictions. The “Choose Your Own Topic” essay would be gone. Students would be held to a tightly enforced word count maximum of 650. Document attachments would no longer be accepted, forcing students to work within a text box that supported limited formatting including only bolding, italicizing, underlining and, strangely, the use of just one paragraph break.

Very early on, the complaints via internet message boards and application help centers revealed the folly in this one break paragraph plan. We can assure you, over the decade in which we have been helping students with their college admissions essays, we have never seen a thoughtful, well-structured, 650-word entrance essay that limited itself to two paragraphs. The Common App has since claimed they never meant to implement a one paragraph break rule, pointing out a formatting function that allowed students to use single-return paragraphs; a feature that lent applicants the ability to submit awkwardly formatted essays, devoid of tabs and line space breaks. Like this:

Where ignorance lurks, so too do the frontiers of discovery and imagination. There can be no thought of finishing for ‘aiming for the stars.’ Both figuratively and literally, it is a task to occupy the generations. And no matter how much progress one makes, there is always the thrill of just beginning.
Science has not yet mastered prophecy. We predict too much for the next year and yet far too little for the next 10.

Science cuts two ways, of course; its products can be used for both good and evil. But there’s no turning back from science. The early warnings about technological dangers also come from science.The regret on our side is, they used to say years ago, we are reading about you in science class. Now they say, we are reading about you in history class.

Can you find the paragraph breaks without breaking into a migraine? Neither can the admissions essay readers.

This morning, to the delight of frustrated students and college essay advisors everywhere, testing of the Common Application revealed a new development.  Real paragraphs! Separated by actual line spaces!

Achieving this new format and confirming that paragraph breaks make it to the final phase of your application is not completely intuitive. After pasting an essay into the Common App essay text box and adjusting for resulting formatting issues (of which there are many, as it seems Word and Google Docs formatting is not supported by the Common App program), a student must manually insert each paragraph break. These spaces will not be evident within the saved text box, and the final essay will appear much like the example of single-return formatting above. In order to confirm that paragraph line breaks have actually been added in the appropriate places, students need to view a PDF print preview of the essay, which is accessible only as part of the active submission process.  What. A. Pain. Still, the tool is available to students, and we suggest they use it. The step-by-step process should go something like this:

  1. To access the PDF print preview, you must first fill out all sections of the Common Application. Before attempting to preview the essay via submission, make sure each section has been marked with a green check box indicating completion of all requirements.
  2. Enter a school’s application from the list in the dashboard. You may want to add a random school specifically for testing reasons. The testing process will be infinitely easier if this school has no additional supplement requirements.
  3. Fill out all the data for this test school. You will then be able to start the submission process.
  4. Hit “Submit” to access a PDF print preview option. Scroll to the bottom of the application to find the Common App essay, and check it thoroughly to ensure spacing and formatting is all properly applied.
  5. If you need to make changes to the essay post-preview, you must exit the submission process. There are multiple ways to halt submission, but since you will be experimenting so close to the final stage of the application process, we do recommend again that the Common App essay be previewed through the lens of a test school.

This is what you should see in your PDF print preview:

Isn’t it beautiful?

Back To School seems to have kick started a host of last-minute revisions to the online Common Application, and we are committed to staying on top of the latest updates. Check our blog regularly for more information and for fun essay writing tips and tricks that will help you craft a more interesting and effective personal statement, now complete with paragraphs!

Done drafting? Don’t forget to proofread!

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